This should focus on what you can offer a person...
This will be the hook to get them to book the Awareness Call.
Include personal information about you, your family, hobbies, interest.
Sound so business-like where you are not relatable (in regards to you saying that you want a personal touch).
Use objective statements - My goal is to help you...
Keep the point of view consistent (I, my, me). Do not refer to your business as a separate entity from you. Life with Gia is you. So to reference "Life With Gia" is like talking in the third person, and that is never received well.
GET IN TOUCH